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Reason why I said to talk about Jamaican stuff is that you are entering a niche that is highly saturated, it is going to be hard as nails for you to get any traction..

Find content that is unique and it will get you a good viewership once your delivery is on point..

See vid below for ideas on transitions and so on and so forth.. I'd stay away from green-screens.. if not done correctly it makes your video look cheap, tacky and unprofessional.

Also play close attention to the sweep sound effects on each transitions.. those add punch, and do you notice her mic?? those are rather cheap.. invest in one..

Very good points, I can respect that.

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wishlist u need a backdrop and modern day transitions. The girl needs to control her movement she forcing her actions.

True, but she has a passion so I'm hoping she will get better over time.

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Did a third one but made silly error...turned on the mic but didnt turn on the audio recorder it was connected to :-(

so Audio is from the camcorder

but feel free to share thoughts on video quality, shot and rendered 1080p 60fps sony vegas pro 13

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Cho. Bex yuh bex caw yuh get bad rivyu.

Dont know who you are but you got jokes...

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Did a third one but made silly error...turned on the mic but didnt turn on the audio recorder it was connected to :-(

so Audio is from the camcorder

but feel free to share thoughts on video quality, shot and rendered 1080p 60fps sony vegas pro 13

Once again... audio is poor... very poor... and the audio is not normalized for all the different clips etc...
That eyes question as well as the others has been beaten to death (I guess it would be interesting to a person who has not heard them) but for me it's far from original..

Presenter also has 0 vibes... she has nice boobs thou.. I give her that...

Once again.. the Audio is painful....... Editing also needs allot of work.. Keep at it.. you can only get better..

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Once again... audio is poor... very poor... and the audio is not normalized for all the different clips etc...
That eyes question as well as the others has been beaten to death (I guess it would be interesting to a person who has not heard them) but for me it's far from original..

Presenter also has 0 vibes... she has nice boobs thou.. I give her that...

Once again.. the Audio is painful....... Editing also needs allot of work.. Keep at it.. you can only get better..

I'll tell her you like them :-) R_c_r__

Not sure what exactly needs to be changed with editing but, thanks for feedback.

totally agree on the audio.

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Did a third one but made silly error...turned on the mic but didnt turn on the audio recorder it was connected to :-(

so Audio is from the camcorder

but feel free to share thoughts on video quality, shot and rendered 1080p 60fps sony vegas pro 13

Concept isnt original but i like the questions. The video editing needs a little work but keep going and ull get better. Video is mad funny